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Tue
1
Jul '08

Why we proofread before turning in a manuscript

I read all my manuscripts out loud. It’s not just spelling errors or missing words that I’m looking for. It’s things like this.

Cassie looked ahead, expecting to see the Queen’s Court, but the road through the forest still wove through the trees.

No kidding. Really? The forest had trees in it? Wow.

Maybe I should just say…

Cassie looked ahead, expecting to see the Queen’s Court, but the road still wove through the forest.

4 Comments »

  • http://dsgood.livejournal.com Dan Goodman

    Someone needs to write about a forest which doesn’t have trees.

    • http://www.maryrobinettekowal.com Mary Robinette Kowal

      Would that be a petrified forest?

  • http://www.david-loftus.com David Loftus

    I’ve heard it’s often possible to see no forest for all the trees.

  • http://puppetkaos.com Kelvin Kao

    If a tree falls in a forest where there’s no trees… wait…

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